Sunday, October 21, 2007
2007/10/19
I am used to the work in Door's English. I review for the students, listen to them read story books, and check their homework and corrections. Not knowing what to do, I was confused before. Now everything is okay to me. I can handle the work well. Thanks for Adelaide, Jill, and Fiona's help.
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Hi again. This first blogging period ended on November 7th, but you have no blog entries for a while before that. There are only 11 entries so far when there should have been 21 by Nov. 7th, so I have to cut your grade a lot for that.
You should use "at Door's English." Also there is a missing object in "I review for the students." More: "okay for me" and also use "Thanks to Adelaide, Jill, and Fiona for their help."
Grade this time: would have been about 55 if the writing were perfect; I'll give you a nice round 50. Write enough for the second period and you'll be OK.
Wishing you well
Chris O'Brien
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