Thursday, May 10, 2007
My Hometown
My hometown is a friendly place to live. I grow up in Chiayi and I enjoy my life there. Most people in Chiayi County are farmers who work hard to plant fruits, vegetables, or other things. Most farmers are traditional, so they always welcome visitors to their places. They also care about their neighbors and friends. As soon as something happens, everyone knows about it. When someone has trouble, people would help him or her immediately. Finally, they would share what they have with each other. If you want to find a place to live, myhometown, Chiayi, would be a good choice.
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What's this about seven posts in two days? Please recall that the goal is to be writing frequently, not just to have the right number of paragraphs. Not that the writing is bad; it's pretty good. You're only short by three entries, but I don't feel I can count all these "multi-blog" days; they're really single entries that have been split.
Mostly this entry is good. I really should be sticking to the ones near the first blog deadline, though, so I will just mention a couple now. "Would" is not right in the sentence "As soon as. . ." since this is describing a current situation; the same is true in the rest of the article. Use simple present to describe current situations.
Chris
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